Saturday, December 6, 2008

My Happy Ending Comments

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</>Just because your world is ending
Does not mean that mine is, too
So stop acting condescending
I won't lose control to you
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Gloraly Gomez
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Joey Rodriguez 06 December 2008

Deep poem and I like the words you used also, very real and faithful coming from the heart. you have great talent Keep writing. My regards Joey

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Caroline Weeks 06 December 2008

Biting, sharp narrative and well penned. Good work! Caroline

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Gloraly Gomez

Gloraly Gomez

San Juan, Puerto Rico
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