Sunday, January 10, 2010

My I Miss You Nightmare Comments

Rating: 5.0

just about every night i wake
enhale that sharp breath i need to take
i wake up in sweat, i wake up tears.
i wake up and wish to rid my fears.
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crystal thomas
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Aira Olayvar 10 January 2010

Hi there crystal, It’s nice to read the words of hearts… so as to say, when a person writes something… the readers knew whether the emotions were fake’n or if it has been taken from within… your 'I miss you nightmare” sounds intriguing. Just like me, I would inspire you to write more in order to be practiced, effective and well, whether it be in writing poems or in reading emotions… till then, I’ll be seeing you around. :)

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