Friday, June 28, 2013
My Rendezvous With God Comments
Rating: ★4.3
Today I walk up with a new-fangled hope
As the sun flickered in my eyes,
It asked me not to beg for my stomach
But to earn for my cries.
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2/28/2026 5:08:19 AM # 1.0.0
I enjoyed reading this very creative poem, though may I make one suggestion? It seems that you're trying to follow a structure for each stanza, but you keep switching between structured and free verse. I suggest that you either stick to the structure, or remove the structure completely and make it a complete free verse. Other than that and a few grammatical errors, which could have been on purpose, The poem was rather enjoyable.