Tuesday, March 22, 2011

My Window Pain Comments

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As I look outside my window Inside your eyes i see peace, i see a soul of greatness.

I see a precious individual of beauty and fame with the heart of steal
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Derek Clipps
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Rayven Forrest 06 July 2011

This is very passionate, meaningful, and interesting. This poem brings life to your eyes as if you are living it. Great Job! Continue writing.

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