Sunday, July 5, 2015

Natures And Love Comments

Rating: 3.5

I free in this fly;
I feel in this love and lover's joy.
Scent of flower
i feel in me;
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Binod Bastola
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Commendable work...Just t of constructive criticism ifbold....Always upper-case/capitalize the letter (I) when it is by itself, even if it's in the middle of a line...Otherwise...Nicely Done, O....~ FjR~

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