Monday, April 17, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

I need love
like the grass needs the sun.
You know, in my life,
you're the only one.
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Louie Thompson
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Sugar Bear 17 April 2006

Aww, that's so Cute! I love it! The ending is sad though, I know how you feel me and my boyfriend just broke up and I've been feeling the exact same way (sort of) but, anyways all the best of wishes for the two of you or for you and another in the future. All in all Great poem and I wish I could give you more.. but a 10 from me! :)

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