Life, its not a silent sea to sail through
It’s a test that brings the best out of you.
It’s a fight, a hard journey
Not a bed full of roses,
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I really like your poem and the message I got from it. The only thing that you should maybe look over is the grammar. English is also my third language and as you're from India I feel your struggle, but maybe let someone take a look over it before you publish it.
i love this poem write more like it so other people like me will learn this lesson to never back down and never stop the journey ahead of you and i hope other people get inspired not just me and i hope i inspired people with the lesson i just told