Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Nightmare... Comments

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The Shadows are appoarching
The Darkness is taking over
The Light is weakening
One by one, the souls are fading
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Maika Nozaki
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Emily Oldham 11 May 2009

i especially like the 'fading... fading...fading' at the end, its almost like the nightmares repeating itself and all the time you're getting weaker and weaker....... great poem thanks Keep writing Athena *** words will change the world ***

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