good poem, good message. it would be a bit easier if you would add some punctuation in there. It makes the words flow better. and you might want to check the spelling in some places. but very good
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good poem, good message. it would be a bit easier if you would add some punctuation in there. It makes the words flow better. and you might want to check the spelling in some places. but very good