Sunday, January 3, 2010

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Im not going to do it,
so just let me be.
im not going to do it,
cant you see.
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Monica Miles
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Caitlin Walczyk 03 January 2010

good poem, good message. it would be a bit easier if you would add some punctuation in there. It makes the words flow better. and you might want to check the spelling in some places. but very good

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