Monday, May 23, 2005

No One Knows..... Comments

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you don't know what i feel
you don't know what i see
you don't know what i know
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Roberto Camtoe
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Aisha Masha 06 January 2017

hear what i hear know what i know and then you'll understand me. That is very true!

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Raynette Eitel 23 May 2005

Take a deep breath and start again. I sense you feel isolated. Let us feel that isolation without telling us that we don't know what you're going through. By the way, it is important that you spell words correctly when you communicate through a poem. Use your spellcheck and get going so we can indeed know you. And thanks for being brave enough to share. Raynette

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Roberto Camtoe 23 May 2005

I am writing a comment for my self to let people know me. i am a beginner at poems and a few of my poems are bad but it was cause i was fooling around and my friends and i made them up but now it's just me..... By the way my name is Jenn

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