Sunday, November 19, 2006

Nocturne Comments

Rating: 3.8

There should be a grand piano.
Somewhere in the room
my hands drown in the dark.
I'm out of tune. Someone
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jean maudit
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Stephen Parnell 19 November 2006

This poem has it all. I especially enjoy the symmetry, the sound, and, of course, the images. ''My hands drown in the dark.'' is probably the most powerful line I've read in a while. Wonderfully crafted work, jean! Regards, Stephen Parnell

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