Not Even You.

Rating: 5.0
No one to talk to,
No one to trust,

With secrets so dark and deep
I have answer beyond which you seek

I hermit away, shut off from the world
Talking to no one about what i've done, seen or heard

But you would not know this, by looking at me
I am someone different, to the one you see

For now i don't have any friends
For now i have no one to talk to
For now i have no one to trust...
No one at all, Not even you.
You... don't... want me...
Saturday, April 18, 2009
Dans Only 19 April 2009
To me this poem speaks of betrayal. I love how it explores it without revealing it. Very ingenious.
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Alison Cassidy 19 April 2009
Sounds as though you're having a hard time of it Janay. Though I seem to remember having similar feelings of despondency when I was your age. Life gets better, I can assure you. I like your expression 'I hermit away', it's original and interesting. And you're right. We all wear masks to hide our deepest feelings. I guess it's a way of saving face in a scary world. Keep writing. It's a great way to let go of stress. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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