Monday, November 17, 2014

November Ember Comments

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Dull afternoon sky
like a bruised fruit;
leaves peeling off the trees like
unplayed notes,
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Mark Hamilton
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Heather Wilkins 17 November 2014

the first stanza dull afternoon sky like a bruised fruit is beautifully written excellent work

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