Sunday, July 20, 2008

Obtuse Comments

Rating: 5.0

The quill occupies
a quivering hand,
animates my thoughts.
Justice not done.
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Neethi (10 Aug 1990)
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 March 2009

It is very difficult to understand things, to be remembered or to be forgotten. Obtuseness is very painful too. The poem deserves 10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Wali Jamali 22 July 2008

Memories, soured by stipulations, you struggle to forget, Wounds re-exposed.................... What else does it require to convey your own inner self in such a appropriate way. Well done. God bless you

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