Ode Poem by LUCA BARATTA

Ode



Other deaths at sea
and tv news is pleased
there is no more strength to look for a job
other lost loves
grudges with your mother left
other lighters and useless things to sell
to legs spinning round
other taller buildings
new hopes on sale
somewhere in the globe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 08 July 2018

An ode praises. Your poem is an example of words that do not even make a poem. If you are serious read the top 500 poems. Then start writing for kids. For example: There was a little cat who wanted to be a poet But she didn't know how except meow, meow Told that was a start, she started to growl growl [You finish it]

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