Tuesday, September 2, 2008

Ode To Emalee- The Baby That Lived Comments

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Small and sweet handle with care
Her life is weak, the baby with strawberry hair
I weep and stare as they accuse
But I never left so much as a bruise
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Lydie Mathers
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Ron Flowers 27 October 2008

There is a lot of emotion in this poem. It must have been very difficut to write. I commend you for doing so. Regards Ron

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Good lesson to be taught to everyone.The shaken child syndrom is a form of child abuse and people who handle a baby or a small child should handle with care and love.Damages could be permenent.I'm glad your child survived it.Good poem great advice.

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Lydie Mathers

Lydie Mathers

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