Saturday, March 18, 2017

One Last Time.. Comments

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I feel your breath upon my cheek
Your heartbeat next to mine
Cradled in your arms; but know
It's just for one last time
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Raina Hutchins
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Saadat Tahir 19 March 2017

potent and deeply emotive...dripping with love....but.... also impending loss it left an aura of petrichor without the rain or the drizzle... you wrote a beautiful pc and left it open to possibilities....allowing the reader to scratch his head and make of it what he may...wish you had left some note... :) liked

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