Tuesday, September 6, 2011

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Deep inside the darkened space my mind’s been known to go,
I’ve recently remembered all the love I used to know;
It seems that all that time has done is to solidify this place,
This warm, inviting, summer night where I last beheld your face;
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Clayton Anderson
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Wendelin Weird 06 September 2011

Absolutly beautiful. Your way with words flows throughout the entire poem. i love your style and imagery. Keep writing, you never know how many it may help.

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