Monday, December 8, 2008

One Step Away From What You Made Of Me Comments

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We stand apart
Silence washes over us
As you speak with words of
Nothingness
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Kiki Marie
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ahh.. I like this.... Flows great and I love how you want to stay the slave and not know the truth when you already do.. I know excitely how you feel in this poem.. I have been there before and its not a good feeling but not to fight it you get to stay and believe you're happier.. Great poem ~Krista~

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