momo carreon

Our Love

Our love is like water
That runs smooth
And smoothly runs by
Like the wind and its softness

But our love
Is rough and complex
Tough and full of roughness

Untraceable remarkable
Full of hope and vanity
Enough to combine
And become one.
To never tare apart

Our minds wonder
The soft touch
The sweet kiss
Hard breaths

that’s our love
And I hope
It never ends

So much love
Brings us closer
Rejuvenates minds
And brings us back to life.

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 20, 2009

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  • Cj Smith (1/20/2009 10:50:00 PM)

    you just totally described what i have been trying to for so long but have never been able to. I love it! ! Good Job!

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