Monday, March 23, 2009

Our World To Claim Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here I am, lying next to you
I’m lost in your eyes, holding you tight that’s all I want to do
The way you brush your hair, the smiles through the mirror, there’s no place I’d rather be but there
All alone, the world feels so cold, when all hope is gone you are the light that that gets me home
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J.B. Smith
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Ben Burgess 24 November 2009

Fantastic poem that could also make a very good song! 10/10

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