Saturday, July 4, 2009

Overprotective Parents Comments

Rating: 5.0

My parents don’t believe in me,
What should I do?
They feel I am lying to them,
Saying, ‘’I don’t have faith in you! ’’
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Carol Gall 04 July 2009

parents can be overprotective but its cuz of love of you

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Susan Jarvis 04 July 2009

This poem flows along effortlessly. It manages to combine rhythm and rhyme with a hard-hitting message - superb! Just for the record, parents don't always get it right, but their reason is nearly always love. S ;)

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