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' Pain And Suffering..............'

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Pain and Suffering.................

Pain and suffering
are holy messengers,
constantly saying
“You’re on the wrong path! ”

Yet few listen.

(feb.2009)
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Ronny Self 27 April 2009

An interesting and quickly spoken view of pain. As I writer of mainly dark poetry, I found myself drawn in by your title. The last line leaves me to pondering..Are you saying people should listen to pain and give in when it is required? Or are you praising human preserverance? Hmmm...I suppose I as the reader need to make up my own mind, eh? As the poem is well written and leaves me pondering, I have to give you the full ten. A good write, I look forward to future works. Ronny Self

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