Thursday, August 25, 2016

Painful Silence Comments

Rating: 3.0

as I look at you I feel the warmth
of your arms wrapped around me
something does not feel right
there's an unfamiliar tension in the air
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Hope Franks
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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 26 August 2016

nicely painted a painful love....love is not always painful but so many times it full of pain, sorrow, tears, etc. but it teaches us so many things.......a pain less heart can never understand the feelings of others.... So such pain is good..... a lot of thanks to share you painful silence...10++

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Malcolm Two 25 August 2016

Liked this poem, thanks for sharing. Waiting for more by your Marie

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Raiven Moore 25 August 2016

sad to say I have been there.. it gets better though with time and a lot of courage..I like the honesty of it

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