Thursday, October 15, 2009

Past And Present Comments

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A knowing measured in fearful mind
of a road that has long been paved
Shaking feet on the edge of awareness
a scarred heart laying concaved
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LoraMae Hawkins
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Gold Fish 15 October 2009

A tightly interwoven poem pointing to the need to the leave the past behind and to accept the present. I like your examples from the past: the road, the scarred heart, pain, shadows, fear and lament. By the way, you have an excellent command of words. This is an outstanding poem that holds a great deal of truth that resonates. Thanks for sharing. Welcome to Poemhunter! 10+

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