Suddenly the pain was gone,
He felt so young, his head was clear,
And gently floating in mid-air
Without surprise or any fear.
Serenely looking down he saw
Himself surrounded on a bed.
'We've lost him, doctor', a nurse sighed.
'That's it', he thought, 'I must be dead'.
'You haven't lost me at all, nurse',
'In fact, I think that I've lost you'.
'No more worries, hurt or stress',
'I'm glad at last my time was due'.
'I can't wait for a bit of rest',
'With those who left me years ago',
And as he spoke he drifted up
And on towards the peaceful glow.
i like your take on dying as a release from pain. good work: ]
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I would like to translate this poem
You have penned the experiences of many I am sure Kev - and thanks for being brave enough to write on such a subject...... well done and 10 + + + from Fay.