Monday, March 28, 2005

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Rating: 4.5

“Why did they hit you? ”
Well, the sun would come up.
“No, your parents,
Why did they hit you? ”
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Sandra Osborne
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Michael Shepherd 29 March 2005

The understated ending is devastating.

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Janice M Pickett 28 March 2005

Ten.....with a bullet. Hugs Jan

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Torie Way 28 March 2005

Great job. I loved the poem...<3

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