Saturday, October 20, 2018

Piano Comments

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Surrounded by groves of dark oak and evergreen.
Rusted and silent, the piano sheds like a snake.
The blue jay takes its strings to construct star-bright nests.
White-tailed squirrels sunbathe atop its peeling black lid.
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Carson Tidwell
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2018

How it longs to be home, to be caressed by delicate slim fingers, of its once-lively master, or even to be bashed on by the master's inexperienced child. Piano as a symbol to portray the inner loneliness..... and love....... than ku. wonderful imagination my dear poet. tony

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Carson Tidwell 08 November 2018

Thank you for those kind words, sir.

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