Place My Hope Poem by sabrina spriggs

Place My Hope

Rating: 5.0


place in my heart in the sunshine
darkness step out of the darkness
in to the sunset
sometimes you wonder in life where you have
been following me like a out cast that you have
the sent from the flower fill the air with perfume
so sweet down over the mountain
watching the sunset over the mountain
lookup at the sky from the shadow
what do you see win you unlocked my heart
with the key
I have fall into darkness were I was so
lost
until the end of time
win you smell a flower with a sweet sent of
the rose in the air
win you look at the cloudy
you have been through fire and ice
come look at my window see the most
amazing view truly the best in the whole wide world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2017

fill the air with perfume watching the sunset over the mountain I have fall into darkness were I was so lost you have been through fire and ice beauty, Scent, perfume, flower, mountain, darkness, fire, ice These are the points i collected from your beautiful poem. Thank you for your thoughts, imaginations A very fine poem, description of beauty as a symbol of the experience of love. Thank you dear poetess. tony

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