Sunday, October 13, 2013

Playground. Comments

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A place for the kiddies,
It had swings and a slide.
It had a roundabout too,
And places to hide.
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Tony Mushrow
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John Brown 13 October 2013

Good poem, but I think the penultimate line is unclear.

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