Ala' Elouri

Rookie (December 30,1996 / San Clemente, California)

Please Remember - Poem by Ala' Elouri

Why did you go?
I gave you my word
I gave you my trust
I gave you my touch
I handed you the world.
Why did you go?
I gave you my everything....
While you gave me barely nothing....
What did I do?
But fall for you
And now when I say goodbye
You let go?
I was waiting for you to cry
Or tell me come back you aren't the stars in the sky
You are the moon who shines my life at night
And you are the sun who brightens my life everyday
I didn't have in mind you'd let me go;
Like I wasn't once the love of your life.
Before you go,
Just remember my smile
And remember the time you first kissed me
Remember the beautiful lie you told me: I love you
And how I loved you more than anyone would love you.
Remember the times I stood for you as much as I can
Remember the times you lied and promised that this love would be forever.
Remember the names we agreed to call our children.
Remember the plans we planned for our future.
Remember oh please remember
Remember there came a day you couldn't sleep till you heard my voice
Ohh I'll do anything just remember
I'm in a hopeless case
And all I wanted was for noone to ever take my place.
I lost
I failed this time.
I'm a failure
everytime I fall for someone or something
And I lost it
Am I the one to blame?
Blame who to blame
I really don't care
But all I really want is for you to stay....
Please remember maybe you'll think of coming back
Maybe you'll feel the love you held for me one day
Please remember
And don't take forever
I reallly need you.
I'm in a very bad hopeless case,
Tears have conquered my eyes....
Please remember,
I need you back by today.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is dedicated to every broken hearted person. To every person who thought he'd or she'd stay with the person they loved but they did a selfish mistake and left.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013


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