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Can we understand love?
Touch it as a pure child,
with lovely hands, smelling of gentle soap.
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Eugenia Dubinova
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Dennis Ryan 17 October 2024

Every once in a while you write a good poem, esp. when your subject involves Ukraine, Russia's pillaging of various Ukrainian locales. Other than that, nothing—Rien— as per my reading of your work … Thursday, October 17, 2024 at 10: 12 p.m. as per my computer clock …

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Dennis Ryan 17 October 2024

This poem says almost nothing—it's just a recitation of general vocabulary terms, nothing specific, nothing memorable here.

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