Friday, November 18, 2011

Pretending Comments

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I'm scared that I'm pretending,
playing every day.
I'm scared that the me I pretend to be,
is the real one anyway.
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My Stolen Identity
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Pari Dharawat 20 November 2011

such beauty needs correct spelling dear.... 'destroy' not 'distroy' Keep Writing :)

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Pari Dharawat 20 November 2011

Beautifully captured the essence of Identity crises....so innocently in these 7 lines you managed to captured the real issue. Commendable. Keep Writing

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