Sunday, June 18, 2006

Prized Possession Comments

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I would never let you go
I hold you too close
I care for you
& you're stressing it
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Ariel Miles
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***** ********* 18 June 2006

This is so beautiful Ariel, but a possession they are not. We cannot possess anyone, only share each other imo, but I know what you mean, They are yours completely and you are theirs. Your poem is a beautiful confessional commitment to love for sure. The best Prize wining poem indeed. Love is just as you describe. Almost unbearable when you are apart. I know it well. Smiling anyway, cus it's our third week of good weather here in cornland and it's Fathers Day and the beach is calling. Have a great day. Tai

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Ariel Miles

Ariel Miles

Brooklyn, Ny
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