Tuesday, November 5, 2013

Promise Comments

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you promised you wouldnt leave
promised you would stay
but there you are
walking out the door
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Brandi Vanorden
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Ashlee Vandyken 07 November 2013

It reminds me of my ex boyfriend. Our relationship consisted of mostly broken promises. Your poem is very good, i love it.

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