Thursday, June 27, 2013

Promises Comments

Rating: 5.0

I treasure those moments frozen in my heart,
When I believed we would never part;
Alas! Ages between us Time has swept,
A promise was broken, a promise was kept;
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Natasha Sharma
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Dinesan Madathil 07 July 2013

A perfect poem in fine format and apt diction though the theme has the touch of melancholy and a little dejection in effect. Good poetry appears to be safe in your hands when the very writing excels in English and Expression. All the best ahead, Natasha.

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