Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Proverty Comments

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I am a joker, ignorant
Amlunatic in a dark forest
A rag dumped in a refuse hep
A mad dog, a wicked snake
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Ummi Abdullah
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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 27 July 2011

I like it. You portray your idea well but your poem also has a figurative aspect that shows skill. Profound.

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