Rain Dreaming Comments
I woke from my dream and felt a chill down my spine,
the dark and lonely night was still alive and i felt far from fine...
I took a minute laying on my pillow and then a sound caught my ear...
the sound of a light shower of rain had broke out, and then i remembered... my fear...
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I love the title and the multiple déjà vu's. I did stumble a bit on some of the transitions, yet the nature of the poem may preclude that. The idea of rain and dreams is very appealing. Keep it up!
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3/12/2026 5:24:53 AM # 1.0.0
This is crazy because this is how i feel when its raining. this is a Great poem. (added to my favorites)