Friday, June 29, 2012

Ransom Comments

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Ransom resented whenever the ocean encroached on the land,
Because she could no longer visit certain areas upon her walks,
Though she sometimes was heard to make small talk about its unseemly loveliness;
The rhythmic murmuring, the predictability of the tides.
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Patti Masterman
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Kevin Patrick 07 July 2012

The prose style was amazing it never felt boring and made me want to read it again, to me the ocean symbolized her subconscious fear of death, it seemed like a sentient being that Ransom understood to be the barrier between living and death. The end was both sad and amusing. A masterpiece for Masterman

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Johnathan Juarez 01 July 2012

this is clever as it is beautiful, and sad really but a little redemptive at the end. u r vast patti.

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