Sunday, August 6, 2017

Reaching Out Comments

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In chills― your
face swims, In dark
fireflies soar to fly
into your eyes.
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Satish Verma
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Gurleen Kaur Narang 06 August 2017

The emotions have been captured in your poem in a very careful and precise manner. Can you read from the stains of an empty cup of tea? My life had been like that. These lines are really relatable by many since their life is also no different from that of yours.

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