He deemed his life unimportant
He considered he was lost, forgotten
But when he shared his worthless feelings
With a good friend, one who knew him
And his actions well,
The friend helped him see
The influence he had had on others
And the good example he had been
The man was blind but his friend helped him see.
Sometimes we all are blind, but our eyes can be opened
By another. The man who deemed his life unimportant
Was told by his friend to re-flect and re-view his feelings
Or to re-deem and consider them again
And when he re-deemed his life and actions
It redeemed his life...a redemption almost as sweet
As the final redemption he hopes for
The one enabled by the Man above.
c aaron
a redemption almost as sweet As the final redemption he hopes for The one enabled by the Man above. love d very much your notes.. your value does not decrease simply because another one is not able to see it and value it.. soo true dear friend poet.. tony
Very true my friend Tony...sadly so many people struggle with their own importance and value in life because they need or would like positive reinforcement but don't receive it...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a wonderful sentiment and so very true! Sometimes we are blinded to our own value! I really enjoyed how you structured this poem and the pace and flow were bang on! Good job Christopher! ...10++
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