Thursday, November 11, 2004

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now just the broken laugh
that we have
pain inside you
cant erase tears which i show
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Rani Caesara
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. . 11 November 2004

Very nice Rani. I understand... this poem, questions... how do you heal a wounded heart? How to forgive when you can't forget? Right? I It's good that you used 'choked phrases' :) that's how heartbreak feels...... Good job!

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