Tuesday, December 25, 2007

Remember The Fallen Comments

Rating: 5.0

My eyes begin to open,
My surroundings start to show.
I haven't landed where I was hoping,
This I already know.
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Kailan Thomsen
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Maria Ervin 09 January 2010

this is great kailan. not too long at all. i can feel his anguish. keep up the great work!

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Ruta Kulkarni 22 July 2008

2 long! but kinda cool & sensefull! : -]

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