Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Rest In Peace Comments

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Come by his place and see his sleeping face,
Walls of empty picture in white paint suffice.
Smoke glass window with outer rain falling,
How bad weather can gloom his days coming.
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Jay Garmino
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Lily Law 24 September 2008

i do wondered what is the feeling of peace that u had expressed greatly in ur poem... thanks.... =)

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