Riddled Sky Poem by mohammad ahmadizadeh

Riddled Sky



Sky,
is an obstacle
the riddled curtain
between up,
the ocean of light
and down
wrapped by dark

hearts
fire up their guns
the stars are
bullet holes
on high

moon is
the hole of sigh
my heart fired it up
to the sky

I hope
droplets of light
dribble down

Wednesday, October 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 05 October 2016

hearts fire up their guns the stars are bullet holes on high Beautiful expression, and wonderful verse, the sadness is magnified within the imagery. Evocative well done.

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 08 October 2016

Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and writing kind words.

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