Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Riding A Cloud Comments

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I once had the pleasure of riding a cloud
Seeing the spectacle of differing towns
Streaming across the streams and lakes
Causing the fields of grass to shake
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Eric The Viking
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Adeline Foster 09 July 2011

Eric: This is a very good poem. Lines I especially like were: The daring looking for a mountain to climb When the misunderstood, understood just fine Wonderful line, that. Invite you to read mine - Love's Diamond - Adeline

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