Sunday, November 2, 2008

Robin's Retreat Comments

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He staggered, stumbled, struggled onward,
Strapped arm pulsing, burning, raw.
Matted, sweat-caked, reeling, lurching,
Clothing rank and tunic gore.
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Kevin Eaglesfield
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Fay Slimm 03 November 2008

Now this one leaves me guessing a bit Kev... we are I take it in Sherwood of the forest kind. the poorly man in question must be the Robin of fame in those parts. The John in the last line is the last line of attack of the three merciless vagabonds who may be the Sheriff himself no less- oh dear am I going up a gum tree here in the middle of Sherwood.? Come and rescue me Kev. A great read though - - loved being there. Fay.

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