Monday, April 18, 2011

Running Comments

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My feet fall,
Heavy on ground,
No other stirring,
No other sound.
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Adeline Foster 19 April 2011

May I point out that piers are pilings that hold up a dock where boats are moored. I do believe you may have meant to say peers. That means fellow students. Adeline

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Kevin Halls 18 April 2011

Hi Zoe, just read your poems and really enjoyed them. I especially like the way you aren't scared to open yourself up and write on things that aren't always easy to get across in verse, Keep it up!

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