ray Schreiber

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(sad) -Haiku- - Poem by ray Schreiber

ice on the windows
two speed freaks, a three year old
sleeping in the car

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  • (12/26/2009 11:37:00 PM)

    its a beautiful thought. But the title doesn't sound right. It rouses things better than sadness...a feeling of fear..a subconscious wish wanting that the uncertainties don't happen.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 9, 2009

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