Thursday, December 13, 2018

Sailing At Dawn Comments

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Is there a wind coming up today
A whipping breeze a salty spray
The night is breaking see the way
The colors rise from waves to sky
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Joseph M Donatelli
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Dr Antony Theodore 31 March 2019

The fact we are sailing circles in stasis Not wanting to find any new spaces Feeling the wind through our hair places The warmth of the sun on our placid faces. a very good poem giving the reader new ideas.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Joseph M Donatelli

Joseph M Donatelli

Scotch Plains NJ
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